Aug 4, 2005

many days pass by
august dreams, plans for futures
unkept memories

6 comments:

someone else said...

unkept or unkempt? The latter seem like more fun for most people (though not me).

Rage said...

you're questioning word choice on a poem?

someone else said...

no, i'm building off it to play with words and ideas. it's like the poem never ends that way. except now. because it ended.

btw, are you down on the alternadesi side? check yo e-mail foo.

Rage said...

Down with the whosit? I'm not even down on this site right now...

Yeah - let's extend the next poem.

DesiDancer said...

what a lovely haiku :)

Rage said...

thanks. the next one will be open ended. :)